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She swallowed the pills again, hoping.
I've always wanted to try writing one of these.

What is your interpretation?

Edit 8.13: Holy cr[bleep]! :shocked: A DD?! And here I was thinking about taking this down... Thank you ^neurotype and everyone else who has commented and :+fav:! I'm sure long stretches of boredom will occur soon enough and I can try responding to you all. :D
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Given 2013-08-11
~Faraleigh strikes the right balance of concrete imagery and open narrative in this 6 word story. ( Featured by neurotype )
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Shyartist245 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My mind sometimes heads into dark corners... This is one of those times.

Suicide reattempt.
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ziikra Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
Wow, this is actually really good. Nobody would of think that 6 words could make you wonder so much. Really deep and this is one of my favourite DD's of all the time :hug:
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GDeyke Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013   Writer
I love the multiple layers of meaning in this. One of the best 6-worders I've seen.
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:iconfaraleigh:
Faraleigh Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you. :) I appreciate it. I'd actually written this as an optimist/pessimist test but have discovered from peoples' comments that there are more options than I anticipated. :giggle: I hope to write more of these at some point.
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:icongdeyke:
GDeyke Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013   Writer
I hope you do. :)
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Gideonted Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
She...swallowed...the...pills...
Again?
H O P I N G
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:iconfaraleigh:
Faraleigh Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student Writer
It's amazing how much of a difference formatting can make. :)
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er49563 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student General Artist
.... :/  I are disappoint 
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:iconfaraleigh:
Faraleigh Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student Writer
Forgive me for disappointing? :please:
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er49563 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Okay, could have worded that better...  Also, props for reading all these comments~Anyways, its not that it is bad, but it is just so...  I don't know.  Stereotypical?  I can't quite find the word..  Oh well.  If it means something to you, that is excellent.  :)  It is just so simple, though.  :P  That is all...
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